Green Day Holic......poems

Aici o sa postez cate o poezie scrisa de mine.....Guys don`t be afraid to say what you think....va rog

My sweet childhood years…
by Musat Oana-Mihaela (16.07.2009)


I remember my sweet childhood years
When the skies were a deep blue
And the grass was greener than it is
You used to read me bed time stories
Now I`m just crying myself to sleep.


Oh, how I miss those years
It`s been a while now
Since I felt like this
Oh, how I miss those years
My sweet childhood years


Until now I never thought I had more tears
I`ve been crying them among these years
But now I`ve noticed I`m not who I really want to be
I`m not the strongest one among these grayish scripts.



I stutter when I think of the days I used to be a kid
I feel that warm breeze in winter even thought I freeze
I think about the years I first learned how to say your name
I tink about the time it was all about our little foolish game

Oh, how I miss those years
It`s been a while now
Since I felt like this
Oh, how I miss those years
My sweet childhood years


For now I`ll just stick up to what it is
Cause I know I can`t bring back those years
Memories can`t feed my hunger up
Only my heart , my soul and my mind…

Oh, how I miss those years
It`s been a while now
Since I felt like this
Oh, how I miss those years
My sweet childhood years




first one i`ll throw in for the critics...enjoy

talentata!

Nu stiu de ce mi-a adus aminte de From Childhood's Hour, de E.A. Poe, desi tema e cu totul alta Iar pe Poe il admir, deci felicitari :) O sugestie:


"For now I`ll just stick up to what it is
Cause I know I can`t bring back those years
Memories can`t feed my hunger up
Only my heart , my soul and my mind…"

eu as scoate ultimul "my", pentru ca strica masura (muzicalitatea mai mult, de fapt), si e corect gramatical si fara el.

Dunno how to name it (by me)





Nothing`s gonna change the way we think

But this world is just the land of make-believe

Think faster than the bastards that are running you

Think smater than they will ever do.





Change the world with just one smile

Cause the sun doesn`t set unharmed

Even he`s the victim of these hypocrites

Even he suffers in the land o make-believe.



Throw those guns away

This is not a video game

This life is real and so are you

Even the things we all go through.



No war, disease, hunger and pain

Nothing`s gonna change this play

If you don`t stick up for your own life

They might as well eat you alive.



This life is just one big fat joke

To die is the thing we`re scared mostly of

But we don`t do a thing to change this fact

I guess we`re just thirsty for more blood.



Throw those guns away

This is not a video game

This life is real and so are you

Even the things we all go through.







another one of my poems

esti isteata imi plac

felicitari! chiar esti talentata.

felicitari esti talentata imi plac poemele tale MAMIIII !!!!

good job girl

sunt fuarte ... incredibile
mai ales ca sunt in engleza
keep writing

stiam eu de ce ti le-am salvat pe toate
mica mea artista

Am revenit cu noi versuri

I lost you

I lost you
Didn`t I my darling?
I lost
The chance to say a word
I lost
Your voice into the darkness
I lost
Myself into the void.

I miss
The colour of you eyes
I miss
Those days it was just us
I miss
Playing with you hair
I miss
The ones we were back then.

I kiss
But lips are sealed
I drown
My tears are running down
I froze
I never felt so lost.

Please forgive
The way that I have been
Please release me
I`m trapped inside a bad dream
Please believe
In me, in you , in us.

foarte tare..in romana e usor sa scrii dar in engleza e greu asa ca bravo.

Nu este dificil sa scrii in engleza, atata timp cat o stapanesti cat de cat. Din contra, este mai dificil sa scrii in propria-ti limba.

Orcum , sa nu iei asta ca pe o ofensa, scrii bine , utilizezi expresii, reusesti sa-ti transmiti mesajul celui ce te citeste.